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Post by Idiot on Oct 10, 2005 10:02:55 GMT -5
Effects of a Storm
Swirling winds of great destruction Bringing clouds filled with despair. Lightning flashes right before us. Rain falls in the moving air.
Firmness in stone walls is taken As it nears the panicked shore. Places that have been since Eden In an instant are no more.
Where is hope in desperation? Where is calmness in the rain? Where is kindness in destruction? Where is healing for this pain?
Winds will lose their strength to sadden. Soon they'll be no more than breeze. Clouds will clear; the rains will lessen. Light will shine on streets turned seas.
Now has come the time for healing. The time has come to heal the wounds. Destruction now turns to rebuilding. Remake a home of would-be tombs.
The winds will blow Both hard and long. But in the end Man's will is strong.
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Post by stardragon on Oct 10, 2005 11:09:46 GMT -5
Woooo-oooowww!
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Post by A Lobster Formally Known as Zi on Oct 10, 2005 19:03:07 GMT -5
ooooooooooh. shiny
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Post by poke on Oct 11, 2005 16:27:29 GMT -5
sooooo beutiful
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Post by Chance Harebell on Oct 13, 2005 14:20:55 GMT -5
Wow, that's great.
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Post by 24 Cows Of Ishmish on Oct 15, 2005 10:30:45 GMT -5
That's really good. Very caring.
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Post by ForeverFrostWings on Dec 8, 2005 1:06:04 GMT -5
Wow I'm awed... very nice claps and lots of them.
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Post by ~0RiGiN@l BrOk3n~ on Jan 29, 2006 8:53:58 GMT -5
Very very good! Loved it
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Post by Melinda-sama on Jan 31, 2006 10:43:57 GMT -5
He's been working at it more, and it's even better now.
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Post by kai on Feb 1, 2006 23:03:44 GMT -5
Very nice.
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Post by stardragon on Feb 2, 2006 18:04:55 GMT -5
Idiot'll have to post tha alterations here Mel, ths posts doesn't say it's ever been edited so I assume what's currently up is still the original.
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Post by Melinda-sama on Feb 13, 2006 18:56:49 GMT -5
Yup.
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