Post by Blaze on Apr 11, 2006 0:44:38 GMT -5
Yes I know it sucks but here is my poem. It's based on how I feel at the moment, I just drift through my days do nothing. I hate everyone around me because they are assholes to me because I don't get the best grades even though I'm smart(I get like Cs and Ds, everyone says I should get As). This is just about how they treat me and basically what I have to go through everyday.
A Sleeping World:
My dreams are filled with darkness
My eyes are filled with hate
My fingers tickle with the sensation of this pain
My brain says I am awake
Sadly, I do not feel this way
All I do is drift between classes dreaming the whole day
Thus I can't seem to wake no matter what I do
I give my body the signal but it never takes it's cue
Someday I will awake, oh that day will be so grand
Someday I will do what I'm capable of, like everyone says I can.
Until this day comes I sit and wait
My eyes glaring, festering with hate
Of a world I have come to know so well
A world that has become my everlasting hell
My world is a dream world in which I feel trapped
As though I were a present all packed and wrapped
I feel unchallenged, I feel unwanted
All the other kids try to make me feel stupid, all am I is taunted
Their stupidity and ignorance
Their eagerness and arrogance
Just serves me an oppurtunity
To show what I really should be
But no matter what I do I feel wrong, the masses just continue to judge me
My motive unknown as my thoughts just float away
They know me as the stupid child, not having a single thought all day
I aim to prove them wrong but ever time I try
I land on my face and can hear their laughter as I begin to cry
If it continues like this I fear that I shall die
But no matter what comes my way I'll continue to rise
So there goes some one of the most ugly and horrid poems I've ever seen, written, or have heard. However I just write to help me vent it doesnt matter to me if it is liked or not.
A Sleeping World:
My dreams are filled with darkness
My eyes are filled with hate
My fingers tickle with the sensation of this pain
My brain says I am awake
Sadly, I do not feel this way
All I do is drift between classes dreaming the whole day
Thus I can't seem to wake no matter what I do
I give my body the signal but it never takes it's cue
Someday I will awake, oh that day will be so grand
Someday I will do what I'm capable of, like everyone says I can.
Until this day comes I sit and wait
My eyes glaring, festering with hate
Of a world I have come to know so well
A world that has become my everlasting hell
My world is a dream world in which I feel trapped
As though I were a present all packed and wrapped
I feel unchallenged, I feel unwanted
All the other kids try to make me feel stupid, all am I is taunted
Their stupidity and ignorance
Their eagerness and arrogance
Just serves me an oppurtunity
To show what I really should be
But no matter what I do I feel wrong, the masses just continue to judge me
My motive unknown as my thoughts just float away
They know me as the stupid child, not having a single thought all day
I aim to prove them wrong but ever time I try
I land on my face and can hear their laughter as I begin to cry
If it continues like this I fear that I shall die
But no matter what comes my way I'll continue to rise
So there goes some one of the most ugly and horrid poems I've ever seen, written, or have heard. However I just write to help me vent it doesnt matter to me if it is liked or not.