Bronzeriders

[stardragon]

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[stardragon]

Owner: NPC - Adoptable

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Rank: Weyrleader
Gender: Male
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Pet: None

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[stardragon]

Owner: Frostwing

Name: L'ron
Age: 23
Rank: Weyrling Master Second
Gender: Male
Family: D'ron (deceased) Lauree (deceased)

Appearance: A moderate height and brown hair with almost black brown eyes. He has thin lips and prominent cheekbones he is strikingly attractive. The only odd feature is a large scar running across his cheekbone the result of his hatching when a violent brown ripped through him to get to his partner.

Personality: Rather proud and a little self assured. He will never pass down a chance to show some one how good he is. He is good with the younger weyrlings. This is a very strategic part of the reason why he is a Weyrling Master Second.

History: L'ron was born at Benden weyr where his father was a wingleader and his mother a wingrider. When he was born they believed he'd make a great dragon rider. But when Starfall was completeed and eggs where ready to be Impressed upon the sands D'ron and Lauree sent L'ron to Starfall where he stood a better chnace of impressing before he was too old.


Pet: None

Dragon Name: Jarth
Age:

Appearance: Well built and defined, large and menacing by appearance

Personality: Quite similar to his rider but maybe a little more serious he does love a challenge and is always willing to use his tactful and strategic mind in races. He often blames himself for L'ron's unfortunate accident during the hatching but there was nothing he could have done and nothing bad occured as a result.

Impression Story: Laron stood upon the sands, shivering with nerves he watched the eggs before him quietly as did all the others. Some of thses where craft or holder children so they weren't as prepared as he was. He'd waited for this moment his whole life. Slowly one by one the eggs hatched. Laron began to think he wouldn't impress when finally one of the final eggs split open, his heart soared with hope, hope soon to be crushed when he was thrown aside by the brown that had emerged. Pain seared through Laron's arm and head he lay biting his lip so he wouldn't cry. A tiny voice chirped sadly in his head.
{Is mine ok?} L'ron sat up feeling warm blood trickle down the side of his head.
{Mine! Jarth is sorry he didnt come soon enough, did that mean one hurt mine?} Jarth's eyes where swirling red with stress.
"I'm fine Jarth" L'ron choaked unknowingly out loud, he reached his hand and placed it upon Jarth's nose, Impression was made.

[ForeverFrostWings]

(Hey star i wasn't able to edit the post above so here are the missing things:)

History: L'ron was born at Benden weyr where his father was a weyrleader and his mother a wing rider. When he was born they believed he'd make a great dragon rider. But when Starfall was completeed and eggs where ready to be impressed upon the sands D'ron and Lauree sent L'ron to Starfall where he stood a better chnace of impressing before he was to old.

Dragons age: (I'm not exactly sure you'll have to let me know how old a young full grown dragon is.)

Impression story: Laron stood upon the sands, shivering with nerves he watched the eggs before him quietly as did all the others. Some of thses where craft or holder children so they weren't as prepared as he was. He'd waited for this moment his whole life. Slowly one by one the eggs hatched. Laron began to think he wouldn't impress when finally one of the final eggs split open, his heart soared with hope, hope soon to be crushed when he was thrown aside by the brown that had emerged. Pain seared through Laron's arm and head he lay biting his lip so he wouldn't cry. A tiny voie chirped sadly in his head.
{Is mine ok?} L'ron sat up feeling warm blood trickle down the side of his head.
{Mine! Jarth is sorry he didnt come soon enough, did that mean one hurt mine?} Jarth'seyes where swirling red with stress.
"I'm fine Jarth" L'ron choaked unknowingly out loud, he reached his hand and placed it upon Jarth's nose, impression was made.

(there you go star hope thats alright ^^)

[stardragon]

Parents can not have Benden's Weyrleaders, sorry. I'm not actually intending to allow any Weyrleader/Weyrwoman children. Benden riders is fine however so I'll just adjust it slightly.

As for the age... Bronzes are physically mature at about 2 1/2 to 3. So how old Jarth is is dependant on how old L'ron was at Impression. L'ron being 23 now, Jarth would have to be at least 3 which means Impression would have been at age 20 or earlier, 20 would jive with the sending him to StarFall before he was too old as 20 is tha oldest allowed on the Sands.

However that would also mean they are just barely out of weyrlinghood themselves and would Not be eligible for a high rank, normally. But due to StarFall's low populuce the Wm Second position can be worked with, however he'll have no chance of advancing farther for several years if they are just now out of weyrlinghood. Just a warning since I'm not positive which way you are wanting to take thier future.

[ForeverFrostWings]

um... sorry but you lost me with the age bit lol not good with math. SO L'ron cannot be the rank he is as of yet correct? Is it possible for me to change his age so he has been a rider for a bit longer? It's ok if not. I'll change the parents also.

[stardragon]

At 23 AND barely out of weyrlinghood it would be VERY odd for him to have a rank above basic wingrider. BUT due to Starfall's small amount of people we can allow the current rank of WM second as an exception this time. However he would NOT be able to advance to Wingleader for several years, if earned then.

If you want to make him older that is fine, it still won't guarantee a Wingleader position in the near future of course, but it would be a possibility for him.

However there is nothing saying he has to be just out of weyrlinghood at 23. What age did you want him to have Impressed at? Keeping in mind that after 20 turns they are not longer allowed to Stand for Hatchings.

If he Impressed at say... 18 that would make Jarth 5 when he is 23, and they would be 2 years out of training and more likely to have a chance at a higher rank.

[stardragon]

So do you want to make Jarth 3 or make L'ron older than 23?

[ForeverFrostWings]

Whatever alows him to be a fairly seasoned rider but not old xD

[stardragon]

Hmm Seasoned.... to me that says at least 25 with at least 5 years out of weyrlinghood. So does 25 sound good? If he Impressed at age 17 that would make Jarth 8 and they would be 5 years out of weyrlinghood.